krishna leela - hindi poem

Rao and Rao
Rao and Rao / 3 yrs ago /
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               कृष्ण लीला

  हे कृष्ण! 

 तेरे चरणों में समर्पित

तन,मन, धन

जग सारा धुंदी,

 

  पर कोई तुमसे न प्यारा!  

 

     अजीब कितनी,

तुम अकेले सब जगह,

सबको नाचते हो,

और राह भी दीखते हो,

  यही हैं तेरे लीला!

 

जब जब टूट पड़ी,

तुम ही ने उठाया,

जब रास्ता न दीखाया,

तो मंजिल तक पहुचाया

  तुम हो महान!

 

. चाहती हूँ तेरे गुण गान गाऊँ,

लीकें सुर ताल से न मिलता

तो मैं क्या करून?

लिखने के लिए कवी न हूँ,

पर लिखती हूँ तेरे सुर गान !

                 This is my first hindi poem and i hope its right.

               English 

                      Hey Krishna!

                  Tere  charanon mein samarpeet,

                  Taan ,Man, Dhan,

                   Jaag saara dhoondo,

                  Par koyi tumse na pyara!

 

                 Ajeeb Kitni,

                Tum Akele Sub Jagah,

                Sabko Nachate Ho,

               Aur Raah Bhi Deekhaate Ho

               Yahi Hain Tere Leela!

 

                 Jab Jab Toot Padi,

                 Tumhi Ne Uthaya,

                 Jab Raasta Na Deekhaya ,

                  To Maanzeel tak pahunchaaya

                  tum ho Mahaan!

 

                 Chahati Hoon Tere Gaan Gaoon,

                  Leeken Sur Taal Se Na Milta,

                  To Main Kya Karoon

                 Leekhney Ke Liye Kavi Na Hoon,

                 Par Leekhte Hoon Tere Soor Gaan !

                  


Hanif11 / / 3 yrs ago
Hanif11

O dont worry you will be fine R&R ji.. u are doing an awesome job..
Hanif


ghazala / / 3 yrs ago
ghazala

Hi,

Very good attempt..! Keep writing :-D


Asirthomas / / 3 yrs ago
Asirthomas

RR

It's very well written...A Wonder from Non Hindi writer...

Enjoyed the poem.

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navneetkumarbakshi / / 3 yrs ago
navneetkumarbakshi

Chahati Hoon Tere Gaan Gaoon,

Leeken Sur Taal Se Na Milta,

To Main Kya Karoon

Leekhney Ke Liye Kavi Na Hoon,

Par Leekhte Hoon Tere Soor Gaan

Very good attempt Jayshree. Good expression...Tum kavi ( kavitri ) ho aur tumhara sur taal se mil raha hai :))

Cheers
Navneet


yash chhabra / / 3 yrs ago
yash chhabra

Sunder kavita..aur pahli hindi kavita ke hisab se to bahut hi sunder prayas hai...achha likha aap ne ..bhavisya me bhi hindi me likha kijiye....yash


Sootradhaar / / 3 yrs ago
Sootradhaar

R and R...! बहुत खूब !!!...लिखने के लिये कवि होना शायद आवश्यक नही है...केवल भाव चाहिये...जब दिल मे भाव होते है..तो श्ब्द अपने आप जुडते जाते है...ऒर जिन रिश्तो की मैने बात की है वहा भी केवल भाव ही प्रधान है...नाम..बेमानी है...सुन्दर सी कविता भेजने के लिये धन्यवाद !


Bhiku Matre / / 3 yrs ago
Bhiku Matre

R&R : Very nice poem and a good theme.


rajnigandha52 / / 3 yrs ago
rajnigandha52

चाहती हूँ तेरे गुण गान गाऊँ,

लीकें सुर ताल से न मिलता

तो मैं क्या करून?

लिखने के लिए कवी न हूँ,

पर लिखती हूँ तेरे सुर गान !

lovely lines


rajnigandha52 / / 3 yrs ago
rajnigandha52

Jayashree

That is a very nice poem ---and what makes it better is your attempt at expressing your self in Hindi ---because the theme is best suited to our own Indian languages.

loved reading it wish I could give you atleast 2 reccos


sureshmiyer / / 3 yrs ago
sureshmiyer

tumhara prayas achcha lagaa

thanks
suresh


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