Pattu vin Ellaigal ( Tamil sirukathai)

Muthukkumar
Muthukkumar / 10 yrs ago /
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Epothum pol illamal anru nalla mazhai. Thideerendru vantha mazhai, yaarum ethirpaarakatha mazhai, ellorayum oru nimidam athirchikku ullaakiya mazhai, irukaatha enna, erandu varudamaga antha thisai yai etti parkatha virunthaali, thideerendru than koottalli kalaana idi, minnal udan vanthaal irukathaan seyum. Eppothum pol pattu vukkum pattuvin kudumbathukkum othunga antha idam thaan kidaithathu. Antha araikurayaga kattapatta membaalathin kizhe, pattu vum avan penn jaathiyum than erandu kuzhanthi kaludan vanthu utkaanthanar.

"ei neela, ethavathu saaptia..? kuzanthaiga saaptucha...?"


Neela kavaliudan thirumbi paarthaal.
"illeenga, antha mukkula irukara kalyana veetu vaasal kupathottila nethi raathiri konjam saapadu kidachuthu, athai kozanthaikalukku kuduthuten. En vavutha kazhuva thaan, lo lo nu alanju kittu irunthen, athukulla intha pazha pona mazhai vanthu kazhutha aruthuduchu.."

"mmmm...mazhai pei yaratha partha innum oru mani nerathukku nikkathu nu thonuthu..., athu seri...nee eppadi antha mukku mandapathu kuppa thotti lernthu saapadu edutha..athu..kitta voda area vaache..vida mattane avan...nammala partha udane avan kootaali kala kootikitu vanthduvane..??"

"etho namma kozhanthainga raasi...inniku nu paarthu adutha theru bagavathy amman koyil la pongal kuduthaangalaam..anga poitaan...", naanum ponen..ana anga kootatha partha udane oru nimisham...manasukkula..thigil kilambidichu..", adichi viratirivaangannu theriyum...athaan thirmba odiyaanthuten.."

"vara vazhi yila thaan. intha kalyana mandapam nybathuku vanthuchu, suthi parthathula kitta vayum kanum avan payaan saka vayum kaanum, seri ithaan neram nu solli konjam saapada labakunnu eduthukittu nadaya kattiten"

"athu seri...mm..seri ethana mani vara inniku koyil aanda pongal podaarangaalam?"

"ethuku..athaan sonnen illa pa..namaku onnum aaambdathu nu.., theva illama tayatha waste pannathe.."

"ada che...naan ketathu athuku ille...tayatha therinjukitta...kitta vara evalo neram agum nu theriyum illa...mudinja innum konjam saapadu eduthukittu varuven..antha mukku kuppa thotti lernthu..athu ku thaan.."

"...mmm..saayangalam vara podaraangalaam..nee poitu vaa...naan kozhanthaigala paarthukaren, seekiram vanthuru...mazhaila romba nanayatha...udambuku ethavathu vanthuda poguthu paa"

"seri neela..vanthudaren..."

solli vittu pattu virrrr....enru nadaya katinaaan...kalyaana mandapathai nerungiyavudan, oru nimidam pattu sutrum mutrum kitta vin mugam engayavathu therikiratha enru paarthan. Thanakku aabathu illai endru therintha vudan, theiriyaamaaga oru adi munne senraan. Anaal avan ange satrum ethirpaaratha onru kannil pattathu. Erandu pichai karaargal, mugam adayalam theriyatha pichai kaarargal, antha kuppai thotti aruge unavu thedi kondu irunthaargal. Pattu vukku oru nimidam bayam, anal athai seri seithu kondu, antha pichai kaarargal mugathil padaamal lavagamaga kuppai thotti aruge senru unavu eduka muyanraan.

"tha cha...angu paru va...namakke onnum illayam inga ithu saapda vanthuduchu...adichi thurathu va."

oru kallai eduthu antha pichai karaan eriya, antha naai veeel enru alariya padiye, kulaithu kondu thirumbavum than membala kudai yai nokki senrathu...............!


mutrum


Meenakshi Shanker / / 10 yrs ago
Meenakshi Shanker

aaiyo , kashta paduthureye..onnume puriyille saar...konjam engmil a vittu , english le velakkama choleriyella ? ...


karma_kameleon / / 10 yrs ago
karma_kameleon

same to you :))

k_k


Saranya Kishore / / 10 yrs ago
Saranya Kishore

ha ha!
gud one! unexpected ending! :)
it has been days since i read such stuff


Suganyaa / / 10 yrs ago
Suganyaa

nice


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