These Whores Are So Dirty: Flash Fiction

Dev Kumar Vasudevan
Dev Kumar Vasudevan / 6 yrs ago /
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"These whores are so dirty, so filthy," said the policeman as he walked out of the red light area, "they corrupt society. They destroy our great culture." 

He paused for a moment and checked his pockets which were full of currency notes he had collected from these filthy, dirty whores. Once he was assured that he hadn't dropped any of the notes he continued towards his home cursing those filthy, dirty whores he met once a week. 


Dev Kumar Vasudevan / / 5 yrs ago
Dev Kumar Vasudevan

hi sridharaa.. thanks for the comment... glad you liked this effort...


sridharaa / / 5 yrs ago
sridharaa

hi dev,

good piece of flash fiction....depicting hypocrisy

cheers


Dev Kumar Vasudevan / / 6 yrs ago
Dev Kumar Vasudevan

ultimately it is all about money, isn't it vety? thanks for the appreciation..


VETY / / 6 yrs ago
VETY

great read devji. yes they are dirty but currency notes an't because they don't transmit aids.


Dev Kumar Vasudevan / / 6 yrs ago
Dev Kumar Vasudevan

hi avinash.. thanks for the appreciation... you are right, when we are unable to comprehend something we curse it as 'filthy'.... is it not?


Avinashjee / / 6 yrs ago
Avinashjee

good one devji. we routinely curse so many 'filthy' things.
avinash


Dev Kumar Vasudevan / / 6 yrs ago
Dev Kumar Vasudevan

hi sandeep... thanks for telling me this... the double standards are so glaring, visible so clearly. is it not?


Dev Kumar Vasudevan / / 6 yrs ago
Dev Kumar Vasudevan

hi lp... thanks for the comment, glad you liked this post.


Sandeep Shete / / 6 yrs ago
Sandeep Shete

hi dev,
your flash fiction story reminded me of a much longer one by guy de maupassant, "boule de suif." it also talks of society's double standards towards prostitutes.
sandeep


lotuspetals / / 6 yrs ago
lotuspetals

mr.devkumaran...very true to the subject....lp


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